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Post by Praetor on Jul 25, 2008 19:44:47 GMT 12
Wait, now don't kill me over this, but LuciferIX's words ended up in your post?
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Post by zeaeevee on Jul 27, 2008 2:56:05 GMT 12
a little help here guys. now im sure most of you (if not all; but i know for sure Lucifer has) have read my fic of 'Nothing They Do Will Tear Us Apart'
now i've been dawned on with a case of MAJOR writer's block for continuing that story. piece of the next chapter is already written but now im a bit stuck.
so if anyone has any ideas for the continuation of this fic, i would greatly appreciate it.
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Post by Praetor on Jul 27, 2008 20:33:59 GMT 12
Perhaps LuciferIX, Ryu, Cascade, or Xaotl can help you with it. They usually have enough time.
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Post by tyrannosaurusalan on Jul 28, 2008 1:05:36 GMT 12
I don't have writers block, it's lazyness that's keeping me from writing my 6th chapter.
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Post by XAOTL on Jul 28, 2008 1:15:45 GMT 12
I don't know how... honestly. I don't really quote, or click on things that I can't understand. The only Japanese I remember is Kwaii, and I probably spelt that wrong.
& alan, I know where you're comin' from.
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Post by LuciferIX on Jul 28, 2008 3:50:06 GMT 12
I'll read it over again and see what I can do Zea. But coming up with story ideas isn't really my strong point.
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Post by zeaeevee on Jul 28, 2008 4:08:23 GMT 12
thats ok. any little idea will help. thanks Lucifer
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Post by C.Gholy on Jul 28, 2008 5:17:15 GMT 12
Zea, I have an idea, How about Drew coming onto May and Misty and Dawn coming onto Ash. Ash and May have a argument over it but Brock has words with them and they make up again. I have another idea as well, May gets pregnant but rumours start going round that Ash isn't the father. I hope that helps Zeaeevee. I'm typing up the second part of the hard feeling. The third will contain a lemon www.fanfiction.net/s/4401722/1/The_hard_feeling
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Post by zeaeevee on Jul 28, 2008 5:35:23 GMT 12
uh.... blink blink thanks for the idea CG, but i was referring to my 'Nothing They Do Will Tear Us Apart' story. i was kinda thinking of including myself in there, but all depends on what you guys think.
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Post by JbstormburstADV on Jul 28, 2008 7:55:40 GMT 12
Hmm... if I remember right, we end up where Ally locks herself in the closet. Well, may I suggest you have Ally attempt suicide, but, at the end of her exchange in her mind, she hearts out of it. However, that's only part of a chapter. I got nothing for the rest.
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Post by zeaeevee on Jul 28, 2008 8:27:55 GMT 12
huh? who are you replying to JB?
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Post by LuciferIX on Jul 28, 2008 17:13:08 GMT 12
Wow, big banner Zea.
But sorry that it took so long for me to respond to the story idea. I've been swamped with not only reviews to catch up on but things to do around my apartment.
First of all a personal suggestion is to continue with the Pikachu/Eevee/Skitty love triangle. I completely forgot about that in the story and it made me laugh quite a bit. But then again thats mostly because of my favorite PokemonxPokemon couple.
As for the actual storyline, one suggestion that I would have to give is to make the upcoming battle a double battle with Drew and Misty vs. Ash and May. In doing that they could get both of their battles done right away and more importantly both couples can bond due to the teamwork needed.
If I come up with anything else I'll post it.
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Post by Praetor on Jul 28, 2008 19:29:54 GMT 12
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Post by LuciferIX on Jul 28, 2008 21:03:33 GMT 12
Ah I was wondering when Shadow King was going to post this. Thanks Praetor.
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Post by zeaeevee on Jul 28, 2008 22:26:37 GMT 12
wow! not a bad idea Lucifer. thanks. any other idea's would still come in handy though... oh... as for my banner, it was just a little something i was trying for the first time.
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