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Post by tyrannosaurusalan on Aug 6, 2008 1:11:26 GMT 12
Oh boy! What an interesting way to introduce the shared affections, and are you seriously planning a lemon? However, you overdid it with the 4th wall, even considering the pun you setup. Other than that, it's great. I don't think I'll make it a lemon, just keep I might make some limes in the next chapters. |
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