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Feb 8, 2009 12:31:57 GMT 12
Post by xxxRAWRS on Feb 8, 2009 12:31:57 GMT 12
All right, here's a fanfic I've been wanting to write, but could never bring it out in words. It's rated T, because the girl will probably definitely use a lot of swearing by the time she's found. I'm not sure if I'm going to turn this into an Advanceshipping story or not, but I'll move it if it does. Prologue
It should’ve been a typical day. Battling, training, all that stuff, yes.
“I’m gonna train for my next gym battle!”
“I’ll train for my next contest!”
The moon glowed. Without this and the stars, it would have been pitch-black outside.
Everything was so sudden. The wind blew. The stars shown brighter than ever.
Somewhere, deep in the forest, a girl screamed.
And that's pretty much it for the prologue. I'll update when I can.
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Feb 10, 2009 20:01:09 GMT 12
Post by Midnightmoon602 on Feb 10, 2009 20:01:09 GMT 12
Nice start but maybe you should make it longer and write down who is saying what. tell them where they are at least.
I don't want to say more because I'm not a good writer myself.
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Feb 14, 2009 12:19:02 GMT 12
Post by xxxRAWRS on Feb 14, 2009 12:19:02 GMT 12
It's just a prologue. And since this takes place in Sinnoh, you can guess who said that.
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