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Post by Gaiash Ketoji on Jul 18, 2008 10:34:42 GMT 12
I also suggest reading other fanfics (and books) before writing a fanfic. It should help you get an idea of how you might want your fanfic to look.
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jul 18, 2008 10:36:10 GMT 12
Aw, even though the fanfic was bad, I bet you could do better, just read other AS fics or other fics in general and get better. You guys being mean to her isn't going to make her in to a better member And yeah, this whole thread is spammed, and aren't you supposed to be on topic, which um, the last page totally wasn't. Well... we honestly think she is a troll. Did you see her other posts?
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Post by aser4ever2009 on Jul 18, 2008 10:57:51 GMT 12
Yeah, but maybe she's new to the internet and forums idea, haven't you ever been a n00b?
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jul 18, 2008 11:01:26 GMT 12
Never liek this...
Seriously, the worst I did was sign my name after a post... like this:
-The Dark Fiddler
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Post by gysahlgirl on Jul 18, 2008 11:04:10 GMT 12
Aw, even though the fanfic was bad, I bet you could do better, just read other AS fics or other fics in general and get better. You guys being mean to her isn't going to make her in to a better member And yeah, this whole thread is spammed, and aren't you supposed to be on topic, which um, the last page totally wasn't. wow thanks aser4ever2009! lol u inspird me so im gunna write chatpr 2!!!! okay teh next fday ash and ma y went 2 sinnoh to see tehir fridn dawn "hi dawn" may said she was very nervos "hi guys" dawn repld. "hey wuts dat on ur ifnger mayh?" "oh dis is just teh ENGEAGME NT RIGN ASH GAvE me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" (she was excited so i used more !!!s ids thatok?) "wow congratlubnmas u guys" dawn said "how ru gon a get marid"? "in a pkbmon cneter " may rpledid. SUDDENLY TEHR SWAS A DARK CLOUD ADN PAUL CUM RUNING IN AND GRAB MAY
"may ur mine now" paul said "no get off me!!!!!!!" "now ash if u want her giv me pikachuf and catch dialja adn iw ill giv mher bck" "dawn wht ushd we od?" ash adked dawn sdawn lokd ed at him and though t he was hot andd kised him "dawn wut ru doing" "ash letszx have xxusx " dfawn said "no i have to cstch diagla" ash asaid adn went oto the mountain "ok ill cum wti u " and so they went off togyther. r+r ples!!!!!!!
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jul 18, 2008 11:06:04 GMT 12
No story should be written so quickly. If you are writting this quickly, you basically say that it sucks.
Plus, you took none of the advice given to you... so no.... just no....
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Post by aser4ever2009 on Jul 18, 2008 11:06:52 GMT 12
omg, this is better than PikaMasterADV's fic ;D
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jul 18, 2008 11:08:36 GMT 12
SArcasim.... nice...
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Post by aser4ever2009 on Jul 18, 2008 11:11:48 GMT 12
Um, I wasn't being sarcastic
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Post by gysahlgirl on Jul 18, 2008 11:15:14 GMT 12
um ok im banng teh dark filder from posting in my thread cuz its CONTSTUCTIV CRITIXM ONLY!!!!! thanx for teh review aser4ever2009 im glad some1 know s a good stroy wehn they se 1
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Post by aser4ever2009 on Jul 18, 2008 11:18:05 GMT 12
hah hah, you're welcome! Keep writing, don't pay attention to the haters, they're just jealous btw, can I have your signiture? I want it as my desktop ;D
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Post by gysahlgirl on Jul 18, 2008 11:45:25 GMT 12
thanks aser4ever2009 ill pm it 2 u ok? ? also chap3 may b laet im hitting writers blok!!!!
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Post by narutoninja44 on Jul 18, 2008 11:48:04 GMT 12
YOU CANT BAN DF FOR TELLING YOU TO STOP TROLLING!
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Post by aser4ever2009 on Jul 18, 2008 11:53:09 GMT 12
But she can ban for saying this: it all sucks. You grammar sucks, your spelling sucks, and the execution of the idea sucks.
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Post by narutoninja44 on Jul 18, 2008 11:54:37 GMT 12
She cant ban anyone, this is a free internet but the freedom comes with consequences and rules. Only our Admins and Mods can ban peeps, and you two really are gonna get it. -smiles-
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