Post by Vurtax on Dec 3, 2008 14:19:56 GMT 12
This is already up on Fanfiction.net Here
www.fanfiction.net/s/4680195/1/Our_Memories_Our_Story
Although a while back I quit Writing (And I'm angry I did) I am coming back and I found it right to post with the Fanfiction I loved working on most, My Pearlshipping fanfic. Got it from a dream I had and until I posted it on (a while back) I couldn't write (Which sucked because I had too many fanfictions I was working on in the first place.) I apologize fortaking this downa while back, I shouldn't have been so dense headed on Machinima.
Well I know you're not here to listen (or read) me talk so here it is.
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To the far north of Japan lies the Sinnoh region, a region once traveled by the now Pokemon Master; Ash Ketchum. To the bottom left corner, is the beautiful lake known as Lake Verity, also known as the resting place of the legendary pokemon Mesprit.
It was currently raining in the Verity area. At the lakes edge was a blue haired coordinator named Dawn. She is about 19 years old now and she couldn’t feel any worse about herself than she did now.
I tried so hard, all these years, for him to notice me. And now he’s off somewhere. I bet I haven’t ever crossed his mind since the day we parted. How could somebody be so dense of ones feelings? But Dawn realized she was the only one to blame, she should’ve realized that he was not the type to focus on love as much as she was. All those times I flirted with other guys around him, hoping to see him be a little jealous. I guess he thought that I did that because I had no interest in him. How could I be so stupid? I should’ve known the guy who can’t even cook a poffin, would not be the one to know about love. Dawn couldn’t help but cry as she dropped her head down to her lap. Her hands crossed and her legs scrounged up where her crossed arms rested. Her beautiful face could not be seen.
A large penguin Pokemon with a triton for a beak was currently swimming in the lake. When he saw that his master was upset, he swam to shore and raised one of his wide wings above her head to protect her from the cold rain coming down upon her.
Dawn did not look up, “Thank you Empoleon.” The Pink, and Black clad coordinator still sat there bunched up trying to cover herself from the pessimist through her mind created from all the thoughts that had ran through her head. Hoping they would never come out again.
Dawn tried to rethink some of the old times with him.
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It was dark and damp in Mount Coronet, Brock, Dawn, and Ash were trying to make it through. Pikachu and Staravia were currently unconscious
Then out of nowhere a heavy mass of Zubat came zipping through.
“Ash!” Dawn’s instinct came out. Before she knew what she was doing, she had her arms wrapped around the trainer. Ash crouched down to avoid having the many bat pokemon run into him when he realized Dawn had clung onto him.
“Um, Dawn? A little room please…”
“Oh sorry,” Dawn let go, blushing and embarrassed out of her mind.
“Hey where’s Brock?”
“Guys! HELP!” Brock’s voice could be heard like a strong echo.
“It’s coming from over there!” Dawn pointed to a ledge that was inside the mountain.
Ash and Dawn ran over to the edge, it was a flat ninety degree angle to a dark bottom. Ash, and Dawn couldn’t even see Brock.
“Brock are you okay?!” Ash lifted his hands to his mouth to channel his voice.
“I don’t think so, I think I broke something!” Brock responded.
“Hang on! I’ll be coming down!” Ash looked inside his pack for some rope. But the only one who had rope was Brock.
“Darn it!” Ash was starting to ransack his pack desperate in trying to help his friend. And bearing in mind that Staravia was unconscious only made it harder.
“Ash, I think I see a way down,” Dawn pointed to a tunnel to the left of them that looked like it was heading downward.
“I hope your right, it’s our only option.” Ash looked to her and then refocused on the tunnel.
Dawn and Ash began to walk through the tunnel. It was obviously clear that Dawn was afraid of what could be around the corner. She was also afraid for Brock.
Ash looked at her. “Dawn, are you alright?”
“I’m just scared, I’ll be fine. I am just panicking out of possibilities.”
“Whatever you say,”
“Yeah, no need to worry.”
“And that’s when-”
Dawn then slapped Ash before he could finish.
“I guess I deserved that.” Ash rubbed theside of his face.
Then suddenly a rumbling came from the cave walls. All at once a whole fleet of Bronzong sprang out of the rock. They spun around some and then focused their gaze on the two.
“...This is where we run.” Ash began to dash and Dawn was right behind him. The Bronzong were gaining on them when Dawn’s left foot got caught by a rock. She tripped and fell with her left leg gashed against the rock after being the first thing to hit the ground.
“AHH! ASH, HELP ME PLEASE!”
Ash spun around to see the Sinnoh native on the ground. He ran over to Dawn and picked her up bridal style and began to run again with the Bronzong now even closer to the two of them.
Dawn buried her head in Ash’s chest hoping somehow it would protect her. Ash noticed what she was doing, his face was turning very red.
“If only Pikachu was conscious right now,” Ash grinded his teeth. “Dawn,”
“Yeah?” She looked up.
“Reach for one of my pokemon and throw it out at the Bronzong!” Dawn nodded and unlatched one from Ash’s belt. The ball flew through the air and popped open, a monkey with its butt on fire appeared before them.
“Excellent! Chimchar use flame wheel!”
“Chim, chim chimchar!” Chimchar was enveloped in a flame disc he spun towards the wall creating a solid fire wall blocking the Bronzong’s pass to Ash and Dawn.
Ash began to run again taking notice of her bleeding leg. It was starting to drip to the cavern floor, some of the blood had got on his hand that was holding her leg up.
Chimchar caught up to Ash and the Bronzong were still hot on their tail.
“Chimchar give them an ember barrage!” Chimchar turned around once again and fired the small fireballs. The Bronzong were afraid of getting hit so they created reflect barriers.
“Perfect! Now those won’t go down for a while!” Ash and Chimchar began running once again until they reached Brock.
When they got to the bottom, Ash could make out a slight silhouette of Brock. Ash ran over, and laid Dawn down. Happiny had apparently called out trying to help Brock with Soft-boiled.
“Hapeenee!” The pink pokemon was startled at their arrival.
“Happiny, we’re going to have to help Dawn before we can help Brock. I need you to pull out Brock’s first aid kit.” Happiny saluted and immediately ran over to the pack pulling out the large metal case.
Ash looked at Dawn, and explained as he pulled out the alcohol.
“I’m going to need you to trust me. This is going to sting all over your leg but it’s necessary unless you want a serious infection.”
Dawn weakly opened her eyes. “I trust you.”
Ash took out a medical cloth and covered it with the chemical. He then dabbed it on Dawn’s leg, every time the cloth made contact Dawn constricted slightly and squinted her eyes harder than they were already closed. Ash realized the gash did not stop at the edge of her short skirt.
“Forgive me,” Ash lifted up the left side of the skirt and found more of the gash, he again dabbed the cloth.
“Okay now I can bandage you up.” Ash pulled out the field dressings (medical bandage) and then pulled out more of the medical cloth. He took out the Vaseline as well. He scooped some Vaseline and smeared it on the cloth.
Ash laid the strip over the gash on her leg.
“I need a lift of some sort,” Ash took his backpack (using as a makeshift jack) to prop Dawn’s leg in the air so he could encircle the bandage around her leg. He spiraled around two times to make sure it was secure.
“All done Dawn,” Ash let down her leg, then he pulled out her sleeping bag. Unrolled it and then picked her up and placed her on it.
“Thanks Ash, you should be a pokemon nurse.” Dawn made a compliment-joke.
“No Thanks, if there’s a female version of Brock out there, I’d definitely not want to.”
The two laughed.
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Dawn only could think back to this event, now she was only wishing the tunnel, Ash carried her through was longer.
I should get back home. I have no intention on getting pneumonia. Dawn got up and recalled her Empoleon. She walked slowly back under a tree covered path.
When she reached home, her Mom was at the table reading a newspaper and a cup of coffee was beside her, the Glameow was near the fireplace.
Dawn’s mom looked up, “Dawn, you look terrible. What is it?”
“Nothing. I guess I shouldn’t have been out in the rain,” Her mom knew she was lying but tried not to push the issue. She knew she was mature enough to handle the situation on her own.
“I’m going to freshen up,” Dawn placed down her hat, she then walked towards her room, she pulled out another set of the black and pink clad outfit she loved so much.
She then went to her bathroom to shower.
She turned the knob on hot-warm; she felt her nose clogged from being out there in the freezing rain. Her hair was in locks. She always hated these problems.
Thank god for Sunsilk®, she thought as she looked upon her whole array of the Sunsilk® shampoo clinically proven to take care of every female hair problem.
Dawn had unclipped the two hair pendants that were clutched to her hair on the sides.
Dawn took off her blouse/mini-skirt ensemble and was left in her underwear, as she checked the shower water one more time. She then took off her bra and then her underwear and stepped in.
Dawn was already beginning to feel better as the warm water relaxed her. But more was on her mind still.
I wonder what Ash is doing right now. Last time I saw him on T.V. he was facing off against Steven Stone and winning. Maybe he’s lying back in a hotel with Pikachu, congratulating each other if they won something. I hope he’s happy, even if he is with another girl. No, Ash isn’t with another girl. Last time I heard from him he was actually breaking up with May. He did tell me she changed a lot before she left for Johto with Drew. And it took him a while to realize how she became shallow. Must’ve been Drew’s doing; never liked him anyway.
Dawn took the body wash scrubber and yanked the Old Spice® body wash off the shelf. She began to scrub herself, the scent wafted into her nose at the showerhead.
This reminds me of that day…
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It was raining hard; Dawn was running away from a dark purple haired trainer. She was crying as she ran trying to hold back her sorrow when she saw a black and yellow clad trainer with a Pikachu on his shoulder, in the distance ahead of her.
“Dawn, what is it?” Ash called out to her as she ran towards him.
“Ash, Paul’s after me!”
“Paul? I thought Paul hated us?”
“No, not for that!” Dawn ran into Ash and embraced him as she merely crashed into him. She was again in his chest, and smelled the Old Spice® body wash he was using. Ash would’ve usually pushed her off, but this appeared too serious for him to do that.
Paul had caught up to them with his Honchkrow flying beside him.
“Dawn, let’s finish our match!” Paul yelled at her.
“Paul, cool it! If she doesn’t want to keep battling that’s her choice!”
“No! Her pathetic pokemon need to be shown what true power is!”
“Ash!” Dawn looked up to him. “He was abusing Pachirisu! He’s in terrible condition!”
“You beast!” Ash clenched his fist at Paul. Dawn moved off to the side. Pikachu jumped off Ash’s shoulder and stood sparking, ready to strike Honchkrow.
“That Pachirisu is a lost cause, it’s better off dead.”
“The only things better off dead, is the one who thinks another is better off dead!” Ash pushed Dawn off and was now staring at Paul straight.
“Step aside and your Pikachu won’t be joining Pachirisu six feet underground!”
“You sicken me Paul,” Ash turned around to Dawn. “He isn’t worth the trouble; he will never change his opinion at this rate. Heck I only think it got worse.”
“Turn around or you and your girlfriend are going to have both of my shoes up your asses!” He taunted both of them.
“Forget it Paul, fighting won’t solve anything, that’s why pokemon are still fighting.” Ash and Dawn walked away and went inside the nearby pokemon center.
“Pikachu!” Pikachu took a moment to taunt the Dark Bird pokemon by making the loser symbol on his forehead, he then ran to the catch up with his master.
When they sat down after putting their pokemon in the service trays, Dawn began to apologize.
“Sorry that I made you feel uncomfortable,” Dawn look towards him.
“Huh?”
“You know, when my head was in you know where, I just was over my head scared.”
“No problem Dawn, but I will have to ask you to not do that again.”
Dawn smiled, “Promise.”
What do you think? Cute? Heroic? Semi-Romantic? Constructive critiscism is always welcome. You'll noticed the first six chapters are already up so if you are going to read em all leave a comment (plz) on the last chapter you read
www.fanfiction.net/s/4680195/1/Our_Memories_Our_Story
Although a while back I quit Writing (And I'm angry I did) I am coming back and I found it right to post with the Fanfiction I loved working on most, My Pearlshipping fanfic. Got it from a dream I had and until I posted it on (a while back) I couldn't write (Which sucked because I had too many fanfictions I was working on in the first place.) I apologize fortaking this downa while back, I shouldn't have been so dense headed on Machinima.
Well I know you're not here to listen (or read) me talk so here it is.
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To the far north of Japan lies the Sinnoh region, a region once traveled by the now Pokemon Master; Ash Ketchum. To the bottom left corner, is the beautiful lake known as Lake Verity, also known as the resting place of the legendary pokemon Mesprit.
It was currently raining in the Verity area. At the lakes edge was a blue haired coordinator named Dawn. She is about 19 years old now and she couldn’t feel any worse about herself than she did now.
I tried so hard, all these years, for him to notice me. And now he’s off somewhere. I bet I haven’t ever crossed his mind since the day we parted. How could somebody be so dense of ones feelings? But Dawn realized she was the only one to blame, she should’ve realized that he was not the type to focus on love as much as she was. All those times I flirted with other guys around him, hoping to see him be a little jealous. I guess he thought that I did that because I had no interest in him. How could I be so stupid? I should’ve known the guy who can’t even cook a poffin, would not be the one to know about love. Dawn couldn’t help but cry as she dropped her head down to her lap. Her hands crossed and her legs scrounged up where her crossed arms rested. Her beautiful face could not be seen.
A large penguin Pokemon with a triton for a beak was currently swimming in the lake. When he saw that his master was upset, he swam to shore and raised one of his wide wings above her head to protect her from the cold rain coming down upon her.
Dawn did not look up, “Thank you Empoleon.” The Pink, and Black clad coordinator still sat there bunched up trying to cover herself from the pessimist through her mind created from all the thoughts that had ran through her head. Hoping they would never come out again.
Dawn tried to rethink some of the old times with him.
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It was dark and damp in Mount Coronet, Brock, Dawn, and Ash were trying to make it through. Pikachu and Staravia were currently unconscious
Then out of nowhere a heavy mass of Zubat came zipping through.
“Ash!” Dawn’s instinct came out. Before she knew what she was doing, she had her arms wrapped around the trainer. Ash crouched down to avoid having the many bat pokemon run into him when he realized Dawn had clung onto him.
“Um, Dawn? A little room please…”
“Oh sorry,” Dawn let go, blushing and embarrassed out of her mind.
“Hey where’s Brock?”
“Guys! HELP!” Brock’s voice could be heard like a strong echo.
“It’s coming from over there!” Dawn pointed to a ledge that was inside the mountain.
Ash and Dawn ran over to the edge, it was a flat ninety degree angle to a dark bottom. Ash, and Dawn couldn’t even see Brock.
“Brock are you okay?!” Ash lifted his hands to his mouth to channel his voice.
“I don’t think so, I think I broke something!” Brock responded.
“Hang on! I’ll be coming down!” Ash looked inside his pack for some rope. But the only one who had rope was Brock.
“Darn it!” Ash was starting to ransack his pack desperate in trying to help his friend. And bearing in mind that Staravia was unconscious only made it harder.
“Ash, I think I see a way down,” Dawn pointed to a tunnel to the left of them that looked like it was heading downward.
“I hope your right, it’s our only option.” Ash looked to her and then refocused on the tunnel.
Dawn and Ash began to walk through the tunnel. It was obviously clear that Dawn was afraid of what could be around the corner. She was also afraid for Brock.
Ash looked at her. “Dawn, are you alright?”
“I’m just scared, I’ll be fine. I am just panicking out of possibilities.”
“Whatever you say,”
“Yeah, no need to worry.”
“And that’s when-”
Dawn then slapped Ash before he could finish.
“I guess I deserved that.” Ash rubbed theside of his face.
Then suddenly a rumbling came from the cave walls. All at once a whole fleet of Bronzong sprang out of the rock. They spun around some and then focused their gaze on the two.
“...This is where we run.” Ash began to dash and Dawn was right behind him. The Bronzong were gaining on them when Dawn’s left foot got caught by a rock. She tripped and fell with her left leg gashed against the rock after being the first thing to hit the ground.
“AHH! ASH, HELP ME PLEASE!”
Ash spun around to see the Sinnoh native on the ground. He ran over to Dawn and picked her up bridal style and began to run again with the Bronzong now even closer to the two of them.
Dawn buried her head in Ash’s chest hoping somehow it would protect her. Ash noticed what she was doing, his face was turning very red.
“If only Pikachu was conscious right now,” Ash grinded his teeth. “Dawn,”
“Yeah?” She looked up.
“Reach for one of my pokemon and throw it out at the Bronzong!” Dawn nodded and unlatched one from Ash’s belt. The ball flew through the air and popped open, a monkey with its butt on fire appeared before them.
“Excellent! Chimchar use flame wheel!”
“Chim, chim chimchar!” Chimchar was enveloped in a flame disc he spun towards the wall creating a solid fire wall blocking the Bronzong’s pass to Ash and Dawn.
Ash began to run again taking notice of her bleeding leg. It was starting to drip to the cavern floor, some of the blood had got on his hand that was holding her leg up.
Chimchar caught up to Ash and the Bronzong were still hot on their tail.
“Chimchar give them an ember barrage!” Chimchar turned around once again and fired the small fireballs. The Bronzong were afraid of getting hit so they created reflect barriers.
“Perfect! Now those won’t go down for a while!” Ash and Chimchar began running once again until they reached Brock.
When they got to the bottom, Ash could make out a slight silhouette of Brock. Ash ran over, and laid Dawn down. Happiny had apparently called out trying to help Brock with Soft-boiled.
“Hapeenee!” The pink pokemon was startled at their arrival.
“Happiny, we’re going to have to help Dawn before we can help Brock. I need you to pull out Brock’s first aid kit.” Happiny saluted and immediately ran over to the pack pulling out the large metal case.
Ash looked at Dawn, and explained as he pulled out the alcohol.
“I’m going to need you to trust me. This is going to sting all over your leg but it’s necessary unless you want a serious infection.”
Dawn weakly opened her eyes. “I trust you.”
Ash took out a medical cloth and covered it with the chemical. He then dabbed it on Dawn’s leg, every time the cloth made contact Dawn constricted slightly and squinted her eyes harder than they were already closed. Ash realized the gash did not stop at the edge of her short skirt.
“Forgive me,” Ash lifted up the left side of the skirt and found more of the gash, he again dabbed the cloth.
“Okay now I can bandage you up.” Ash pulled out the field dressings (medical bandage) and then pulled out more of the medical cloth. He took out the Vaseline as well. He scooped some Vaseline and smeared it on the cloth.
Ash laid the strip over the gash on her leg.
“I need a lift of some sort,” Ash took his backpack (using as a makeshift jack) to prop Dawn’s leg in the air so he could encircle the bandage around her leg. He spiraled around two times to make sure it was secure.
“All done Dawn,” Ash let down her leg, then he pulled out her sleeping bag. Unrolled it and then picked her up and placed her on it.
“Thanks Ash, you should be a pokemon nurse.” Dawn made a compliment-joke.
“No Thanks, if there’s a female version of Brock out there, I’d definitely not want to.”
The two laughed.
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Dawn only could think back to this event, now she was only wishing the tunnel, Ash carried her through was longer.
I should get back home. I have no intention on getting pneumonia. Dawn got up and recalled her Empoleon. She walked slowly back under a tree covered path.
When she reached home, her Mom was at the table reading a newspaper and a cup of coffee was beside her, the Glameow was near the fireplace.
Dawn’s mom looked up, “Dawn, you look terrible. What is it?”
“Nothing. I guess I shouldn’t have been out in the rain,” Her mom knew she was lying but tried not to push the issue. She knew she was mature enough to handle the situation on her own.
“I’m going to freshen up,” Dawn placed down her hat, she then walked towards her room, she pulled out another set of the black and pink clad outfit she loved so much.
She then went to her bathroom to shower.
She turned the knob on hot-warm; she felt her nose clogged from being out there in the freezing rain. Her hair was in locks. She always hated these problems.
Thank god for Sunsilk®, she thought as she looked upon her whole array of the Sunsilk® shampoo clinically proven to take care of every female hair problem.
Dawn had unclipped the two hair pendants that were clutched to her hair on the sides.
Dawn took off her blouse/mini-skirt ensemble and was left in her underwear, as she checked the shower water one more time. She then took off her bra and then her underwear and stepped in.
Dawn was already beginning to feel better as the warm water relaxed her. But more was on her mind still.
I wonder what Ash is doing right now. Last time I saw him on T.V. he was facing off against Steven Stone and winning. Maybe he’s lying back in a hotel with Pikachu, congratulating each other if they won something. I hope he’s happy, even if he is with another girl. No, Ash isn’t with another girl. Last time I heard from him he was actually breaking up with May. He did tell me she changed a lot before she left for Johto with Drew. And it took him a while to realize how she became shallow. Must’ve been Drew’s doing; never liked him anyway.
Dawn took the body wash scrubber and yanked the Old Spice® body wash off the shelf. She began to scrub herself, the scent wafted into her nose at the showerhead.
This reminds me of that day…
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It was raining hard; Dawn was running away from a dark purple haired trainer. She was crying as she ran trying to hold back her sorrow when she saw a black and yellow clad trainer with a Pikachu on his shoulder, in the distance ahead of her.
“Dawn, what is it?” Ash called out to her as she ran towards him.
“Ash, Paul’s after me!”
“Paul? I thought Paul hated us?”
“No, not for that!” Dawn ran into Ash and embraced him as she merely crashed into him. She was again in his chest, and smelled the Old Spice® body wash he was using. Ash would’ve usually pushed her off, but this appeared too serious for him to do that.
Paul had caught up to them with his Honchkrow flying beside him.
“Dawn, let’s finish our match!” Paul yelled at her.
“Paul, cool it! If she doesn’t want to keep battling that’s her choice!”
“No! Her pathetic pokemon need to be shown what true power is!”
“Ash!” Dawn looked up to him. “He was abusing Pachirisu! He’s in terrible condition!”
“You beast!” Ash clenched his fist at Paul. Dawn moved off to the side. Pikachu jumped off Ash’s shoulder and stood sparking, ready to strike Honchkrow.
“That Pachirisu is a lost cause, it’s better off dead.”
“The only things better off dead, is the one who thinks another is better off dead!” Ash pushed Dawn off and was now staring at Paul straight.
“Step aside and your Pikachu won’t be joining Pachirisu six feet underground!”
“You sicken me Paul,” Ash turned around to Dawn. “He isn’t worth the trouble; he will never change his opinion at this rate. Heck I only think it got worse.”
“Turn around or you and your girlfriend are going to have both of my shoes up your asses!” He taunted both of them.
“Forget it Paul, fighting won’t solve anything, that’s why pokemon are still fighting.” Ash and Dawn walked away and went inside the nearby pokemon center.
“Pikachu!” Pikachu took a moment to taunt the Dark Bird pokemon by making the loser symbol on his forehead, he then ran to the catch up with his master.
When they sat down after putting their pokemon in the service trays, Dawn began to apologize.
“Sorry that I made you feel uncomfortable,” Dawn look towards him.
“Huh?”
“You know, when my head was in you know where, I just was over my head scared.”
“No problem Dawn, but I will have to ask you to not do that again.”
Dawn smiled, “Promise.”
What do you think? Cute? Heroic? Semi-Romantic? Constructive critiscism is always welcome. You'll noticed the first six chapters are already up so if you are going to read em all leave a comment (plz) on the last chapter you read