Lost in a Forest

[thedarkfiddler]

www.fanfiction.net/s/4069420/1/

I finally got it up, but due to an error caused by lack of experiance, I posted all five chapters at once instead of three at a time, so, next time I update, don't expect as many chapters at once!


Edit:

RATED T!
Not because it deserves it, bu tif I ever write a T stroy, I don't want any below T fans to be disappointed that they can't read it (if tehy even care)

[Praetor]

Your first story finally!

I'll read it when I get the time; which is what I do with all stories I find. I usually read on Fridays or the weekends.

[thedarkfiddler]

Well, this is actually my third story, but I think this is much better than my other two and I haven't uploaded them yet.

[Lara]

Hmm, well I'll read when I have time. Maybe on the weekend, I'm so busy with school and work right at the moment.

[thedarkfiddler]

Yeesh. I know what you mean. WHen I got home from drama today, I got straight to work on my math with mimited break, minus dinner, by the time I finished, it was eight and I was in no mood to do my bonus spanish work...

[thedarkfiddler]

Oh, btw, if I get reveiws from more than 20 different people on this, my next story that I write(not post, since I have two earlier to post) will be aDvanceShipping! I plan on updating tonight if my dial-up allows me.

[Wolfofdoom]

I'll have to check this fic out later

[Praetor]

I'm okay with Ash and an OC, but why include contestshipping?

Ash was swimming in a pool of darkness, no, floating in an empty space of darkness. “Am- am I dead? If this is what death is like, I wonder if this is heaven, or hell, or some other place…” Around him swam pictures of his friends and loved ones appeared, and these formed into scenes he didn’t know happened, and decided where things that wouldn’t happen because he died. Misty getting married, May dumping Drew, Ash beating Paul in the Sinnoh league, Ash getting married to a figure he couldn’t recognize, Pikachu having a kid, Ash’s children who looked too much like him to make out the mother, and Ash on the ground with Alice kissing him, looking up at her. It took him a minute to realize that she wasn’t kissing him, but giving him CPR, and that it wasn’t a vision, but was actually happening! He sat up, knocking Alice out of the way, and coughed.

I'm confused, did May actually dump Drew?

“Alice? Who’s Alice?” Dawn was worried about this Alice person.

“Well, when I stormed off, I was attacked by a Shuppet and I fell in a river. When I washed up on the shore, Alice found me and kept me from drowning. Plus, I think we’re in love with each other.”

A bit rushed, wouldn't you agree?

“Nice to meet you.” Brock was a bit bitter-sweet at this moment. After all, Ash broke Dawn’s heart, and now he was reminded of her“Well, I don’t really blame him for liking her, she is cute.”

Did Brock say that?

If he did, that would make him a pedophile; considering how old he is compared to Alice and Ash.

“Pikachu, you remember me?” Pikachu nodded. “And do you remember him?” She pointed over to a previously hidden figure, a figure that was familiar to him: Brock. He nodded again. “And what about him?” Dawn pointed over to where Brock was, but Brock moved, and revealed the figure he had attacked earlier. Not only did he not know this person, he didn’t want to know this person. He snarled and began to charge electricity. “Pikachu, don’t!” Dawn reached up, and poked a spot behind Pikachu’s neck which sent him onto a state of ecstasy. He stopped charging, and began to fall, but was caught by Dawn, and put on the ground.

Now, why would pikachu (Ash's) want to attack Ash?

[thedarkfiddler]

1) Not yet, because those were visions that Ash had when he slipped into a coma.
2)Perhaps, but you don't know the amount of time that love at first site takes.
3)In the story, it was italicized meaning he thunk it, and nobody really knows the ages so I just put them at about the same age for no reason.
4)Pikachu remembers nothing.

All of these, excepts maybe the second part of 3 was answered in context.