Post by Opposites Attract on Jun 10, 2008 22:56:20 GMT 12
Well this is my story, which I have already created on a different site, and is fairly popular.
I was drawn to Ikarishipping by a site that tells of evidence you can play off to make shippings, and they found that Paul is usually calm with Dawn, compared to the anger he shows towards Ash. I decided that this pair are blatently meant to be, and so my motication made this:
(Bold White is out of the story, and this is the first two chapters.)
She remembered that stupid science lesson back in poke school about magnets. How north and south attract, whereas to Norths or two Souths repel. She remembered that it was also like this for a lot of things too. As she looked to Buneary blushing madly at Pikachu, who wasn't understanding at all. She giggled to herself, how he was so like his owner. Maybe that scientific fact could have been proven wrong with those two. So perfect together.
Then she thought about Piplup, she realised that she had taken on her personality, or just was like that in the first place.
"Hey Dawn!" A friendly voice yelled, she flicked from her thought slightly, listening to him. "Wanna battle!? I could use the practice..."
She waved her hand as a signal of refusal, Brock sighed and battled instead, to stop any arguments before they began.
She drifted back into thought, sitting with her face rested in her palm.
Moments later, she was disturbed once more by the arm of a friendly face. "What's wrong Dawn?" He asked, looking quite puzzled. Girls, think?
She laughed at her sarcastic comment not said aloud. Ash backed off suddenly, wondering what was wrong.
"What have I done this time!?" He sneered, his face not so friendly.
That was it, she couldn't take it, her head felt like it was about to explode.
"Not again..." Brock groaned.
"Pika pika..." He sighed, before being bounced on by Buneary.
Total Chaos.
She somehow ended up pushed onto a bench, she realised she had gone too far, Ash was in a state of shock and so was she. His cheek was red and sore. He just turned and walked off.
As Brock had finished breaking them apart, he continued to stir a soup.
"That was wrong Dawn."
She sighed, "I know..."
"Did he really deserve it?"
She knew what she wanted to say, she also knew she couldn't, "n-no..."
"You wanna talk?"
She heard her mother say in her conscience; A problem shared is a problem halved.
Her problem was that she did it for no reason. She had no problem.
"...Nah. I think I'm gonna go for a walk." She mumbled.
He nodded in understanding, she hated when he did that.
"I understand, to go cool off..."
She scowled under her breath, what did he know about girls, he obviously didn't have a clue.
She just nodded, then walked off.
"You coming Buneary?" She already knew the answer, Buneary didn't need to think about it if Pikachu was about.
"Fine." She breathed.
She found Ash looking over a large pool of clean water, a habitat of a Seaking school. Oddish gathered close to the water, sinking into the moist soil. Gloom smelt sweet here as the water they drank was pure, and Vileplume absorbed sun. Bellosom danced happily for them.
She sat with her back to him, cowering sheepishly.
"Hey..." She started, he completely blanked her.
"Look I'm sorry for hitting you, I saw red. I'm not myself at the moment."
He snorted, she breathed slowly, keeping cool.
"So I'm hoping you'll forgive me?" She pleaded sweetly, he kept looking across the rippling water.
There was an awkward silence, each millisecond was making matters worse for Dawn, she was getting angrier.
"At least answer me..." She spoke impatiently.
"You think you deserve an answer?" He asked, still looking away.
She was confused "Well yeah."
"I think you went too far this time." He flicked his head and their eyes finally met, though Dawn immediately looked down, "I may be stubborn, but no way I'd hit you."
"I said I'm sorry!" She screeched, suddenly glaring back into his eyes.
"Well it's not good enough any more! You think a word can solve everything! But you don't mean it!"
"I didn't mean to hit you!"
He laughed sarcastically, "so you accidentally punched me?"
She butted in "I did not punch you, stop being a girl!"
"I wouldn't want to be a girl if they're all like you." He snapped.
She sucked in air sharply as if something had stung her. She didn't feel the need to comeback.
She just mumbled, "sticks and stones Ash."
Ash watched her look away, as if about to cry. He bit his lip.
"I thought I could I could hear girls crying."
She looked up, Ash turned.
"Don't start Paul, Brock isn't here to hold me back." She warned.
He smirked, "I like to push myself."
"We all know that." She snapped snootily. Ash watched them make sarcastic remarks at each other, until he eventually butted in.
"What do you want Paul?"
He looked at him, "I forgot you were here. Y'know, I've heard of all bark no bite, but you don't have either."
Dawn snorted, she had to agree. He had summed up their argument without knowing what had happened.
Comments? (BTW, this is how we're supposed to post on the site I created this, so if it's different her, could you let me know?)
I was drawn to Ikarishipping by a site that tells of evidence you can play off to make shippings, and they found that Paul is usually calm with Dawn, compared to the anger he shows towards Ash. I decided that this pair are blatently meant to be, and so my motication made this:
(Bold White is out of the story, and this is the first two chapters.)
Chapter one- Contemplating Thought.
She remembered that stupid science lesson back in poke school about magnets. How north and south attract, whereas to Norths or two Souths repel. She remembered that it was also like this for a lot of things too. As she looked to Buneary blushing madly at Pikachu, who wasn't understanding at all. She giggled to herself, how he was so like his owner. Maybe that scientific fact could have been proven wrong with those two. So perfect together.
Then she thought about Piplup, she realised that she had taken on her personality, or just was like that in the first place.
"Hey Dawn!" A friendly voice yelled, she flicked from her thought slightly, listening to him. "Wanna battle!? I could use the practice..."
She waved her hand as a signal of refusal, Brock sighed and battled instead, to stop any arguments before they began.
She drifted back into thought, sitting with her face rested in her palm.
Moments later, she was disturbed once more by the arm of a friendly face. "What's wrong Dawn?" He asked, looking quite puzzled. Girls, think?
She laughed at her sarcastic comment not said aloud. Ash backed off suddenly, wondering what was wrong.
"What have I done this time!?" He sneered, his face not so friendly.
That was it, she couldn't take it, her head felt like it was about to explode.
"Not again..." Brock groaned.
"Pika pika..." He sighed, before being bounced on by Buneary.
Total Chaos.
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Chapter 2- Non refundable Apologies.
Chapter 2- Non refundable Apologies.
She somehow ended up pushed onto a bench, she realised she had gone too far, Ash was in a state of shock and so was she. His cheek was red and sore. He just turned and walked off.
As Brock had finished breaking them apart, he continued to stir a soup.
"That was wrong Dawn."
She sighed, "I know..."
"Did he really deserve it?"
She knew what she wanted to say, she also knew she couldn't, "n-no..."
"You wanna talk?"
She heard her mother say in her conscience; A problem shared is a problem halved.
Her problem was that she did it for no reason. She had no problem.
"...Nah. I think I'm gonna go for a walk." She mumbled.
He nodded in understanding, she hated when he did that.
"I understand, to go cool off..."
She scowled under her breath, what did he know about girls, he obviously didn't have a clue.
She just nodded, then walked off.
"You coming Buneary?" She already knew the answer, Buneary didn't need to think about it if Pikachu was about.
"Fine." She breathed.
She found Ash looking over a large pool of clean water, a habitat of a Seaking school. Oddish gathered close to the water, sinking into the moist soil. Gloom smelt sweet here as the water they drank was pure, and Vileplume absorbed sun. Bellosom danced happily for them.
She sat with her back to him, cowering sheepishly.
"Hey..." She started, he completely blanked her.
"Look I'm sorry for hitting you, I saw red. I'm not myself at the moment."
He snorted, she breathed slowly, keeping cool.
"So I'm hoping you'll forgive me?" She pleaded sweetly, he kept looking across the rippling water.
There was an awkward silence, each millisecond was making matters worse for Dawn, she was getting angrier.
"At least answer me..." She spoke impatiently.
"You think you deserve an answer?" He asked, still looking away.
She was confused "Well yeah."
"I think you went too far this time." He flicked his head and their eyes finally met, though Dawn immediately looked down, "I may be stubborn, but no way I'd hit you."
"I said I'm sorry!" She screeched, suddenly glaring back into his eyes.
"Well it's not good enough any more! You think a word can solve everything! But you don't mean it!"
"I didn't mean to hit you!"
He laughed sarcastically, "so you accidentally punched me?"
She butted in "I did not punch you, stop being a girl!"
"I wouldn't want to be a girl if they're all like you." He snapped.
She sucked in air sharply as if something had stung her. She didn't feel the need to comeback.
She just mumbled, "sticks and stones Ash."
Ash watched her look away, as if about to cry. He bit his lip.
"I thought I could I could hear girls crying."
She looked up, Ash turned.
"Don't start Paul, Brock isn't here to hold me back." She warned.
He smirked, "I like to push myself."
"We all know that." She snapped snootily. Ash watched them make sarcastic remarks at each other, until he eventually butted in.
"What do you want Paul?"
He looked at him, "I forgot you were here. Y'know, I've heard of all bark no bite, but you don't have either."
Dawn snorted, she had to agree. He had summed up their argument without knowing what had happened.
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Comments? (BTW, this is how we're supposed to post on the site I created this, so if it's different her, could you let me know?)