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Post by Vurtax on Jun 28, 2008 14:06:14 GMT 12
This is actually a fan comic i put together (since its still basically a fanfic i posted it here) Rated: T for adult language   The others i'll work on if you guys like these (yes u r mbeta readers) |
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Post by LuciferIX on Jun 28, 2008 16:12:33 GMT 12
Well I bet I know where some influence might have came for that last scene.
I honestly can't say that it was that funny but it was entertaining and got a couple of chuckles. All in all not bad Vurtax.
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Post by Elite4James on Jun 28, 2008 23:58:33 GMT 12
Reminds me of Family Guy when Meg spent the night at her teacher's house. So she could ward off any vampires for the night.
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Post by JbstormburstADV on Jun 29, 2008 8:21:55 GMT 12
Well, this is great!
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jun 30, 2008 8:25:29 GMT 12
Eh, so so. There's room for improvement, but ti's pretty good.
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Post by C.Gholy on Jun 30, 2008 23:11:57 GMT 12
Lol it's really funny but it's good as well.
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Post by Vurtax on Jul 13, 2008 14:23:48 GMT 12
New chapter:  |
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Post by Vurtax on Jul 15, 2008 2:07:10 GMT 12
I know im double posting but i know a couple ppl like this and i just made a new chapter so i hope people check out the post above
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Post by narutoninja44 on Jul 17, 2008 8:38:23 GMT 12
My turn? Well I am known to read a few sprite comics...the first thing I noticed was the words. You need to pick a font and stay with it. Also, you make a good amount of space open, you could use that as typing room. That would also mean, more panels. But it might be worth it. It might not. I dunno. Another thing was that you forced us into the middle of a plot on the first chapter. Nothing was really explained and this makes the comic seem rushed.
It gave me a few smiles and chuckles, I think it would be funnier if you didn't rush the jokes a bit.
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jul 17, 2008 9:17:27 GMT 12
Meh, not as bad as the earlier
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Post by Vurtax on Jul 23, 2008 12:51:50 GMT 12
Chappy 4! Aww son of a (long strand of cussing) i accidentally saved it under the wrong file  |
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