Post by leafeonadv on Jul 26, 2008 2:29:12 GMT 12
After reading so many great fanfics on ff.net i thought i give it a shot. Unfortunately i feel after reading the fanfics they may be too much like another story if is tell me and ill try and change it.
Pokemon League: Revisited
Chapter 1: A New Beginning and an Old Flashback
He had arrived, he was almost home “See Pikachu I told you we almost there” said a boy with raven hair, brown eyes and a gloating smile over winning the bet with his yellow friend. This boy wore a blue tank top and long black pants. “Pikapi pi-ka Pikachu” (Come on Ash hurry up) said his yellow buddy Pikachu. Pikachu is a yellow mouse with a lightning bolt shaped tail, red cheeks and pointy ears that had blacks tips “All right Pikachu I’m coming” said the boy called Ash. Ash and Pikachu had just come back from a successful Sinnoh region, Ash who has never won a Pokemon League had won the Sinnoh championship against long time rival Paul Shinji.
FLASHBLACK
And Ash’s Staraptor just took a heavy hit from Paul’s Torterra. “Return Staraptor” called Ash with a look of worry on his face, he had one Pokemon left, a badly injured Pikachu who was pushed to his limits by Paul’s Electivire. Paul only had Torterra left but Torterra had taken no damage and had an obvious type advantage. “Pathetic, your Staraptor is as useless as his trainer” Paul continued to taunt Ash as the match went. “Pikachu, are you ready” Ash called with fire in eyes. “Pika Pika” (How could I say no). “Ash has sent out his injured Pikachu and this may not be a very match” The announcer calls. “Come on Ash, don’t give up now” called out Dawn and Brock who both had a very nervous looks on their faces.
“Pikachu Quick Attack into Iron Tail” called Ash hoping Pikachu would be too quick for Torterra
“Torterra use Hyper Beam and finish” Paul said with a cold voice
Pikachu easily dodged the attack but didn’t have enough power in his tail to do any real damage to Torterra
“Torterra Frenzy Plant” Paul cried out mercilessly
“NO if this hits, Pikachu won’t be getting up for any time soon” Brock said to Dawn
“Pikachu use Quick Attack and Thunderbolt” Ash said with a look of fear, hoping his little buddy would be safe
Pikachu’s moved with unbelievable speed and his Thunderbolt created circles of lightning similar to an contest in Terracotta Town where Ash last saw a certain brunette coordinator. These circles of lightning electrified the Frenzy Plant and stopped the attack.
Ash could see if Pikachu took another attack he wouldn’t be able to survive then looked up at Torterra and saw a weakness.
“Pikachu used Thunderbolt on Torterra’s head” Pikachu, Paul and everyone in the crowd looked at Ash like his was crazy then Pikachu did as he trained said.
Paul laughed “You think your rat is gonna do any damage”
Ash smiled at the electric attack hit Torterra head on it didn’t seem to do any damage but at second look Torterra faulted. Paul looked in shock “Wha- w-what happened what did your rat do?”
“Look at Torterra’s head” Ash said simply and Paul saw it rain. Ash had sensed the rain and at the perfect timing a rain drop hit Torterra and got fried by Pikachu’s Thunderbolt. “Pikachu let’s finish this Volt Tackle” Ash cried as the rain poured down, “Pika pika pika pika pika pika pika” Pikachu cried as his body covered in electrical energy and with the rain making Torterra suspect to electric attacks Paul did the unthinkable turned his back. Ash and the entire stadium gaped as Torterra stood there helpless as his trainer had abandoned him. Torterra got hit headed on by the Volt Tackle and smoke flooded the arena and as the smoke started to clear Ash saw a facedown Pikachu and saw Torterra also down. “Pikachu and Tort-““Waitttt” Ash yelled interrupting the judge as Pikachu started to rise and eventually stood up. “Okay.. Torterra is unable to battle the winner and champion of the Sinnoh League is Ash Ketchum from Pallet Town.
END FLASHBACK
Pokemon League: Revisited
Chapter 1: A New Beginning and an Old Flashback
He had arrived, he was almost home “See Pikachu I told you we almost there” said a boy with raven hair, brown eyes and a gloating smile over winning the bet with his yellow friend. This boy wore a blue tank top and long black pants. “Pikapi pi-ka Pikachu” (Come on Ash hurry up) said his yellow buddy Pikachu. Pikachu is a yellow mouse with a lightning bolt shaped tail, red cheeks and pointy ears that had blacks tips “All right Pikachu I’m coming” said the boy called Ash. Ash and Pikachu had just come back from a successful Sinnoh region, Ash who has never won a Pokemon League had won the Sinnoh championship against long time rival Paul Shinji.
FLASHBLACK
And Ash’s Staraptor just took a heavy hit from Paul’s Torterra. “Return Staraptor” called Ash with a look of worry on his face, he had one Pokemon left, a badly injured Pikachu who was pushed to his limits by Paul’s Electivire. Paul only had Torterra left but Torterra had taken no damage and had an obvious type advantage. “Pathetic, your Staraptor is as useless as his trainer” Paul continued to taunt Ash as the match went. “Pikachu, are you ready” Ash called with fire in eyes. “Pika Pika” (How could I say no). “Ash has sent out his injured Pikachu and this may not be a very match” The announcer calls. “Come on Ash, don’t give up now” called out Dawn and Brock who both had a very nervous looks on their faces.
“Pikachu Quick Attack into Iron Tail” called Ash hoping Pikachu would be too quick for Torterra
“Torterra use Hyper Beam and finish” Paul said with a cold voice
Pikachu easily dodged the attack but didn’t have enough power in his tail to do any real damage to Torterra
“Torterra Frenzy Plant” Paul cried out mercilessly
“NO if this hits, Pikachu won’t be getting up for any time soon” Brock said to Dawn
“Pikachu use Quick Attack and Thunderbolt” Ash said with a look of fear, hoping his little buddy would be safe
Pikachu’s moved with unbelievable speed and his Thunderbolt created circles of lightning similar to an contest in Terracotta Town where Ash last saw a certain brunette coordinator. These circles of lightning electrified the Frenzy Plant and stopped the attack.
Ash could see if Pikachu took another attack he wouldn’t be able to survive then looked up at Torterra and saw a weakness.
“Pikachu used Thunderbolt on Torterra’s head” Pikachu, Paul and everyone in the crowd looked at Ash like his was crazy then Pikachu did as he trained said.
Paul laughed “You think your rat is gonna do any damage”
Ash smiled at the electric attack hit Torterra head on it didn’t seem to do any damage but at second look Torterra faulted. Paul looked in shock “Wha- w-what happened what did your rat do?”
“Look at Torterra’s head” Ash said simply and Paul saw it rain. Ash had sensed the rain and at the perfect timing a rain drop hit Torterra and got fried by Pikachu’s Thunderbolt. “Pikachu let’s finish this Volt Tackle” Ash cried as the rain poured down, “Pika pika pika pika pika pika pika” Pikachu cried as his body covered in electrical energy and with the rain making Torterra suspect to electric attacks Paul did the unthinkable turned his back. Ash and the entire stadium gaped as Torterra stood there helpless as his trainer had abandoned him. Torterra got hit headed on by the Volt Tackle and smoke flooded the arena and as the smoke started to clear Ash saw a facedown Pikachu and saw Torterra also down. “Pikachu and Tort-““Waitttt” Ash yelled interrupting the judge as Pikachu started to rise and eventually stood up. “Okay.. Torterra is unable to battle the winner and champion of the Sinnoh League is Ash Ketchum from Pallet Town.
END FLASHBACK
