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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jan 16, 2009 1:07:02 GMT 12
Okay, with a month to go (Although very little time actually passed) I want to see progress reports
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Post by timoteyo7 on Jan 16, 2009 7:35:03 GMT 12
.....................Procastination is a terrible thing.......
and also theres my other fics that needs working, my readers are about to rip my throat off if I don't update... I'll try to work on my submission later.
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Post by narutoninja44 on Jan 16, 2009 8:39:37 GMT 12
I started on my first one, I just need to get from A to B and showup all that I need too. =P
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Post by Kohoi Inuzuka on Jan 18, 2009 7:42:38 GMT 12
I actually have mine done. I'm just going through and correcting spelling now. I'll edit this post in a minute so as to post the story. YAY! I'm the first to post their story!
Edit: I took the prompt and did a little warping with it. Hope it doesn't matter.
Prompt 1) Ash wakes up and finds himself on a deserted island.
Ash looked around. There were people he knew, and some he didn't. The ones he didn't were all carrying one of his Pokèballs, and Pikachu.
"Pikachu! Don't worry! I'm coming to save you!"
But as Ash ran to Pikachu, the guy started drifting backwards. He soon disappeared into nothing.
Ash was all alone now. Then, a hand. A gentle hand. It was May's hand. It was on his shoulder.
Ash turned to see May smiling at him. Just then, all the guys that had taken his Pokemon had dropped them, and Pikachu came running to him.
Ash opened his arms wide, and embraced Pikachu, only to find May in his arms instead.
As Ash was about to protest, he suddenly felt something jolt him.
Ash lifted his head up from where he lay and blinked a few times. He looked over at his right. There was May. The stunning beauty of her body draped across the sand-
'Wait. We were in a forest before this. Where are we?' Ash got up and looked around. He and May were on a beach. Without even thinking about it, Ash moved his hand to his belt that held his Pokemon and threw out one of them.
"Swellow! Check for a passage to the mainland!" In a flash of white light, Swellow flapped his enormous wings once and took off to circle the boundary to find a passage to the mainland.
Through all this, May still had not woken up. So, Ash reached for his belt and found he still had his Pokemon. He then got a jolt of fear and looked around, only to not see his Pikachu, but his tracks. 'Okay. Pikachu's here as well. He must have gone off to do something.'
And with that, Ash continued to his belt and pulled off Corphish's Pokèball. He ran off to the bushes so he didn't make any noise when he released Corphish.
"Corphish, come on out. But be quiet." Ash whispered. Corphish was released and he immediately called out "Corpheeeeesh!" very loudly.
Ash jumped at Corphish and covered his mouth. "Are ya trying to wake up May? I need your help to get her up without screaming."
Corphish looked at his trainer for a minute with a puzzled look, but then the look was replaced with giddiness. He knew what Ash wanted him to do. Then, Corphish started to giggle. "Cor-cor-cor-cor-cor-cor-cor."
"Yeah. Let's do it."
Ash walked along, Corphish following him. When they reached May, Ash pointed to her and looked at Corphish. Afterwards, he stepped back quite a ways. Then, Corphish let off a Bubblebeam attack at May.
May awoke with a jolt shouting. She was gasping pretty hard. She looked over at Corphish and shouted at him "WHY IN THE HELL DID YOU DO THAT, CORPHISH? I WAS PERFECTLY SLEEPING IN MY SLEEPING BAG AND-" The whole realization of the situation had dawned on her. She wasn't in her sleeping bag, and she wasn't anywhere near Verdanturf Town and her next ribbon. In fact, they were nowhere near any body of water before. Now she was staring at an ocean that literally looked as if it went on forever.
"Whoa. Where am I?" May asked.
"Same place I'm at." Ash walked up to May.
May looked over at Ash and forgot about the whole incident with Corphish. "Ash! What are we doing here?"
"Beats me. I just sent Swellow out to check for a strip of land that connected to the mainland."
"So, do you think we're on some island or something?"
"Or something. I woke up, and found us here like this." He looked at May, who was wearing a yellow shirt, black pajama pants, and no shoes. She was still in her sleep wear.
Ash looked at himself, only to notice that he was still in his sleepwear. He had a pair of red shorts, black t-shirt, and blue socks. He liked to be colorful even when he slept.
May only had one thought on her mind. "HOW ARE WE SUPPOSED TO GET BACK? MAX IS PROBABLY WORRIED ABOUT ME!"
"Chill out, May. We're gonna be fine. Swellow will be back and he'll have something for us."
Just then, there was a loud yell from the forest. "PIIIIIIIKAAAAAAAAAPIIIIIIIII!"
Ash's heart dropped. "PIKACHU!" He ran in the direction of where the yell came from. May followed him, not wanting to be left alone.
Ash kept running, not wanting to stop for anything. He saw a few rare Pokemon, and even some that he had never seen before, but he kept on running.
As he was running, he called out "Pikachu!"
There was a flash of yellow light, which was Pikachu's Thunder attack, but not used as an attack, but more of a signal. Ash followed it, and in a few minutes, came upon a weird sight. There, in the middle of the field, was a weird looking Pokemon with flowers all around it.
Ash knelt next to Pikachu and said "I'm glad you're not hurt. But what about this Pokemon?"
Ash pulled out his PokèDex and pointed it at the Pokemon. "Shaymin. The Gratitude Pokemon. It lives in flower patches and avoids detection by curling up to look like a flowering plant."
"Shaymin, huh?" As Ash said this, the little Shaymin woke up. Its eyes went wide in shock at the sight of Ash and May, and it tried to run away.
Pikachu, seeing this, ran up to the Shaymin and comforted it with a few words.
The little Pokemon calmed a bit and surprised everyone by saying "Your Pikachu has unfound respect for you."
Ash was dumbstruck by the speech it was capable of. "Uhh, you can speak?"
"Yes. Can't everyone?"
"Uhh, not Pokemon."
However, May was ecstatic. She went up to the little girl, for it was apparent it was a girl, and picked her up and hugged her. "Oh, my god! You are just such the cutest little thing in the world!"
Shaymin couldn't breathe, and Ash could see this, so he said "May, you're gonna squeeze the life out of her! Especially since she's still in pain probably."
May released her grip quickly and said "Oh, god. That's right! I'm so sorry!"
At this, the Shaymin hopped to the ground and said "It's alright. I am not hurt." She shifted her position on the ground, as if to get more comfortable. "I am Daiana. I am one of three surviving Shaymin in this world still. Most others had either been captured, or killed. I was running from a very bad Pokemon when your friend, Pikachu here, saved me from it."
Pikachu then started talking. "Pika. Pikapika pipikachu. Pika, pikapi Pikachu." All the while, he made his face warp and imitate the only Pokemon that Ash knew only Pikachu would still have trouble imitating.
"A Weavile, huh?" Ash asked.
Daiana turned to Ash and said "Why, yes! How did you-"
"I can understand Pikachu, even if he can't speak human." Ash said as he smiled. He was proud of the fact that he and Pikachu shared a close emotional bond like that.
"Wow. Incredible." Daiana said.
"Yeah." Ash was lost in thought about his past with Pikachu, but then returned to earth when he realized that Daiana might know where they are. "Uhh, Daiana?"
"Hmm? Yes?"
"Uhh, could you tell us where we are? And how we came here?"
May perked up from the question, and Daiana looked happy. "Well I know both of those reasons! One, you're here on Dreamers Island. And two, you both are sharing a subconscious dream!"
Ash was taken aback by this. He had woken up from a dream, and now he was in another one?
"I can see you're confused. The both of you." Daiana went over to a bush and spread it apart, revealing a small secluded valley. In the middle, there were three Pokemon: A Gardevoir, an Alakazam, and a third one that Ash didn't know. He pointed his PokèDex at it.
"Mismagius. The Magical Pokemon. Its cries sound like incantations. Those hearing it are tormented by headaches and hallucinations."
"Mismagius, huh? So what do these three Pokemon have to do with us being asleep?"
Daiana smiled again. "Well, it's a weird process. Mismagius usually needs to be in the vicinity of the people she uses her powers on. However, she cannot do so from afar. That is what Gardevoir and Alakazam help her do. Gardevoir and Alakazam broadcast Mismagius's powers well beyond what they could normally do. Thus, also, when you went to sleep, Gardevoir took you," Daiana pointed at May "And Alakazam took you." She pointed at Ash.
"Okay, so how do we get back?" May asked.
Daiana smiled again. This time, even wider. "The whole reason you two were brought here was to be brought together."
"Wait. I don't get it. We were already together back when we were awake. What do you mean bring us together?" May asked.
"Now that, my kiddies, you'll just have to find out yourselves." and with that, the Shaymin ran off.
Ash just stood there dumbfounded. He then had an idea and started walking to the Pokemon to ask them how they could get back, but as he did so, he was flung backwards, sliding 5 feet before stopping. "Owwww. That hurt."
"ASH! Are you alright?" May came over to Ash and helped him up.
"Yeah. Thanks, May." As May helped him to his feet, he felt giddy. He didn't know what for, but it felt as if his heart had skipped a beat. When he heard May call out his name, he felt he wanted her to call it again. He didn't know where these thoughts were coming from, but they felt right.
May picked up Ash's hat that had fallen to the ground and said "I think you forgot this."
Ash grabbed the hat, and as he did so, he accidentally brushed his hand against hers. As he did so, May shuddered a bit. And when she did, so did Ash. And at that moment, he wanted her to hold his hand.
May had the same feeling, and she was a bit more straightforward with what she wanted. She grasped Ash's hands, feeling how soft they were in her own.
Ash was dumbstruck as he continued to hold May's hands while she held his. They each held each other's hands for what seemed like forever. Then, Ash got a bit bolder and moved his hands from hers and embraced her.
She was shocked by the embrace, but decided to give one back in return. Then, she kissed him on the cheek.
Not wanting to be outdone, he kissed her on the cheek as well and said "I love you, May." He didn't even think of saying it, but as he did, the words were true. He loved her.
"I love you too, Ash. I don't want to be with anyone else."
At that moment, the whole world around them swirled in color and shape. Then, everything was black. Ash looked at May and held her hand. And she his.
Ash closed his eyes at the same time as May, and when they both opened them, they were at the Pokemon Center in beds joined together.
"Ash!" came the gruff voice of one of his best friends, Brock.
"May!" came the small voice of May's little brother, Max.
"Pikapi!" came the voice of Ash's long time partner, Pikachu.
Ash struggled to get up, then felt like he was gonna pass out. He swayed a bit, and Brock held him up. "Easy. You took a nasty blow to the head. Both of you."
Ash looked at May and raised an eyebrow. She just shrugged her shoulder, as she had gotten up with Max's help.
Then, Nurse Joy came in and said "Well, you two are finally awake. I'm glad. It seemed you would never wake up. I'm gonna keep you here a few more hours to make sure you're in perfect health."
Ash and May were there for more than a few hours. When they had woken up, it was still nighttime. When they were finally allowed to leave, it was halfway through the next day.
Ash walked out of the Pokemon Center, with May right next to him. Brock and Max trailed behind them. "Thank you, Nurse Joy! I'm glad you helped my friends, and I would also be glad if you would accompany me on a date on a romantic night, say tonight?"
"You need to learn to accompany yourself with manners." Max said as he grabbed Brock by the ear and pulled.
"AHHH! NOT THE EAR!" Brock called out.
May and Ash just laughed, then looked around their surroundings. The first thing that both of them noticed was a small little bush with a flower in it. It was identical to Daiana's back.
They both looked at each other with smiles and didn't say a word about what it was like. They just held each other's hand again, and started walking, Brock and Max following right behind them.
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Okay! Tell me what you think!
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Post by JbstormburstADV on Jan 20, 2009 10:19:30 GMT 12
I got nothing. I've been busy... =P
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jan 30, 2009 12:22:03 GMT 12
Guys! Less than half a month left! I only have one entry, I'm not giving a prize if there's a winner by default!
GIVE ME PROGRESS REPORTS
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Post by narutoninja44 on Jan 30, 2009 13:20:56 GMT 12
I quit, can't think of anything.
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Post by Kohoi Inuzuka on Jan 30, 2009 13:23:42 GMT 12
Aww great. Now what? I don't want to run unopposed!
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jan 30, 2009 13:32:37 GMT 12
If you run unopposed, you get last place automatically
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Post by Kohoi Inuzuka on Jan 30, 2009 13:44:24 GMT 12
Even more great! Now I'm gonna ask other members to write, and hurry it up!
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Post by timoteyo7 on Jan 30, 2009 13:47:13 GMT 12
Troublesome..... I've been busy but I'll come up with something. Would have had a entry already if you allowed lemons you jerk!
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Jan 30, 2009 13:53:34 GMT 12
Well, if you were going to post it here, it'd be censored and I wouldn't care as much for it... plus, I don't like lemons that much, unless they have great plot, and I can skip the lemon parts Well... get off your behind and write! =D
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Post by timoteyo7 on Jan 31, 2009 2:28:57 GMT 12
Luna = Cascade88
Tommy = Dave The Fish Guy
lol why did you two change names? I thought you guys were strangers.... Luna eh? Well you'II always be cascade to me.
Let me go check out the competition....
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Post by cascade88 on Jan 31, 2009 6:45:04 GMT 12
Nikky had an idea we should all change our names here. So me and Dave did. I chose Luna after Luna Lovegood, and I told Dave to call himself Tommy after the White Mighty Morphin Power Ranger >.> As you can tell, Nikky never actually changed her name.
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