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Post by timoteyo7 on Aug 2, 2008 9:08:15 GMT 12
Title: Pokemon Destiny Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance/Friendship/Angst Pairings: Pokeshipping, Advancedshipping, Pearlshipping Warnings: Death, Profanity, Voilence, Rape, Dark Rating: M Progress: In Progress Link: www.fanfiction.net/s/4242297/1/Pokemon_DestinySummary: Ash was a failure, the dweeb, who's dream is to become the greatest Pokemon Trainer, until he gains a mysterious sword and learns that he must protect Misty,May,and Dawn from the Omega Pokemon or all of existence will be destroyed. A new destiny has begun AU Ash realizes he is not Human, and the only way for him to turn Human is to find true love. A new type of Pokemon story.Currently has 7 chapters I NEED HELP CHOOSING PAIRINGS PLEASE HELP!!!
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~Lunar Lucario~
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From the darkest parts of moon I arise
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Post by ~Lunar Lucario~ on Aug 2, 2008 10:34:19 GMT 12
May
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Aug 2, 2008 11:07:23 GMT 12
Well, I read part of the first chapter, and although it was pretty good, it didn't quite hook me. Don't worry, it is pretty good, I just didn't get into it. I did see a few gramarical errors though, so you should work on that. Other than that, good job.
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Post by timoteyo7 on Aug 2, 2008 11:36:03 GMT 12
? What about the rest? That was just the prologue trust me read the next chapters or just read the 6th and 7th one.
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Aug 2, 2008 12:38:58 GMT 12
Well, it just didn't hook me. I'm kinda impatient
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Post by timoteyo7 on Aug 2, 2008 14:17:56 GMT 12
oh lol I see u like those quick and too the point stories.
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Post by thedarkfiddler on Aug 2, 2008 23:33:57 GMT 12
WEll, I like stories that get action failry quickly. Prolouges aren't really my things unless they're battles.
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Post by timoteyo7 on Aug 3, 2008 2:21:33 GMT 12
Okay thats cool.
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Post by timoteyo7 on Aug 17, 2008 5:39:26 GMT 12
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